commercial help

kdhtan · 05-12-2008, 09:36 AM

creating a new radio commercial to beat out my competition who is pretty much running the same commercial as me now.
This is the first time I doing a commercial so I need some expert advice and suggestions here!!!

I am featuring my mobile spray tanning... I have 4 levels of tanning beds, stand-ups, lay-down, Mystic and spray tanning. Open 7 days a week. Variety of skin care products, tanning, after tan lotions.

Please help me guys!!!!

excusemesir · 05-12-2008, 12:03 PM

Doesn't your radio station(s) have a copywriter/production team to help you with it?

kdhtan · 05-12-2008, 03:19 PM

yah but they're not that great. The did 2 crappy ones for me that I didn't care for.
So I fugured I'd pick your brains

BP · 05-12-2008, 03:49 PM

It depends when it will run. What are the two that you did not like. I assume they did not draw in the clients as well?

excusemesir · 05-15-2008, 02:21 PM

Did you go for the quick sale..."first twenty people to mention this ad receive $10 off first package..." or did you go for image..."at KDH Tanning Salon we pamper you in a spa-like atmosphere as your body is wrapped in the warm glow of one of our extra-clean, high- performance sunbeds..."?

jjhoppis · 05-21-2008, 01:33 PM

i am looking for the right bulbs for my 1999 sundazzler stand up booth.
any ideas..

mr belvedere · 05-21-2008, 02:09 PM

Just wait for the commercial to air; then all of your questions will be answered.

05-12-2008, 09:36 AM	#1 (permalink)
kdhtan Join Date: Apr 9 2006 Location: north carolina Posts: 313 Rep Power: 3	commercial help creating a new radio commercial to beat out my competition who is pretty much running the same commercial as me now. This is the first time I doing a commercial so I need some expert advice and suggestions here!!! I am featuring my mobile spray tanning... I have 4 levels of tanning beds, stand-ups, lay-down, Mystic and spray tanning. Open 7 days a week. Variety of skin care products, tanning, after tan lotions. Please help me guys!!!!

05-12-2008, 12:03 PM	#2 (permalink)
excusemesir Join Date: Sep 3 2006 Location: Tennessee Posts: 133 Rep Power: 2	Re: commercial help Doesn't your radio station(s) have a copywriter/production team to help you with it?

05-12-2008, 03:19 PM	#3 (permalink)
kdhtan Join Date: Apr 9 2006 Location: north carolina Posts: 313 Rep Power: 3	Re: commercial help yah but they're not that great. The did 2 crappy ones for me that I didn't care for. So I fugured I'd pick your brains

05-12-2008, 03:49 PM	#4 (permalink)
BP I love Derf!! Join Date: Apr 13 2004 Location: West Coast Age: 41 Posts: 927 Rep Power: 6	Re: commercial help It depends when it will run. What are the two that you did not like. I assume they did not draw in the clients as well?

05-15-2008, 02:21 PM	#5 (permalink)
excusemesir Join Date: Sep 3 2006 Location: Tennessee Posts: 133 Rep Power: 2	Re: commercial help Did you go for the quick sale..."first twenty people to mention this ad receive $10 off first package..." or did you go for image..."at KDH Tanning Salon we pamper you in a spa-like atmosphere as your body is wrapped in the warm glow of one of our extra-clean, high- performance sunbeds..."?

05-21-2008, 01:33 PM	#6 (permalink)
jjhoppis Join Date: May 21 2008 Location: oklahoma Posts: 1 Rep Power: 0	Re: commercial help i am looking for the right bulbs for my 1999 sundazzler stand up booth. any ideas..

05-21-2008, 02:09 PM	#7 (permalink)
mr belvedere DERFERATOR Join Date: May 10 2005 Age: 38 Posts: 8,426 Rep Power: 52	Re: commercial help Just wait for the commercial to air; then all of your questions will be answered. __________________ "A dusty bible leads to a dirty life ..." -Synonymous

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